Girl friends Punto Gt

[puntopimp]

http://cgi.ebay.co.uk/ws/eBayISAPI.d...1962&rd=1&rd=1

also my corsa valver

http://cgi.ebay.co.uk/ws/eBayISAPI.d...3600&rd=1&rd=1

[cinquepunto]

that corsa's a real sleeper! lol

[puntopimp]

aye too right shift though lol

getting mental interest innit

[krazy]

This punto still for sale and if so how much? as there wasnt any bids on egay

[gaz0_0]

its been relisted

[krazy]

i see it thanks

[puntopimp]

not really wanting to sell shes just seeing what swops she gets offered, relisted as it was free listing weekend , been offered some canny cars but she aint fussed

[Shades]

Please don't be offended but eBay adverts that have typo's and bad grammer always put me off. Remeber, this is nothing personal I assure you, I just think it looks really bad in an advert, although I'm quite sure yours is by far not the worst example!

This is my girlfriend punto GT for sale

This is my girlfriend?

16"alloys all with good tyres and tyres are all good

Must be good, you told us twice.

remote central locking and we have 2 blue keys and th red master key aswell

Missed a letter 'E', one too many 'and' and no such word as 'aswell'. 'Also' would have been better.

just had new rear arms and grooved discs on rear with red stuff pads and 2 front wheel bearings and a new gearbox

Too many and's, not enough commas.

( remeber it is 12 year old )

Missing 'M'

There's other little things wrong but I'll let them slip, I'm nice like that! Again, please don't take this post personally I just think eliminating simple errors like those above help to create a better impression of the item and the seller. I'm certainly not trying to imply anything about you, this is just one of my pet hates!

"Shades - PSC forum spelling and grammer police!"

[puntopimp]

nice for you, thats just down to me iam ****ing useless at typing , and dont watch what im doing

so i take it you get the impression iam a spacker because of the advert

[DR_EVIL]

Lol, He did say "No offense"